Karai and Tobu: Lolita Bunnies

Aha, well this is a rather interesting work. If anything, it's because of the amount of sheer detail. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/x/x…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title="XD" />

So then, where to begin? Well the characters are nicely drawn, the anatomy appears fine too me as far as I can tell. The positioning of their hands certainly is unique, even your placement of their ears is rather unique. There is almost nothing in this picture that I perceive is static, except perhaps for their faces. I'm not sure why, but to me their expressions feel a bit simple. This isn't really a bad thing obviously, though in a way I can't help but feel it somewhat contradicts the flowing energy the picture has. It may just be me though. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="19" height="19" alt="" title="Sweating a little..." />

Wow, the details you managed to fit into this work those are really surprising, including all of the individual folds in the clothes, patters on their dresses and hair texture as well! Again, it really helps add more to the picture!

Hm, my last minute advice for you is perhaps to move them up a but in the picture. I don't know, but to me perhaps they have a bit too much headroom. Again it may just be me though. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/e/e…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Eek)" />

Nicely done! You placed a lot of time and effort into this work, and wow does it show! Well done! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)" />